A quick piece I wrote about werewolves…because who doesn’t like werewolves?
Tag: writing
Key and Lock
I won’t lie: This one was a nail biter. My computer was in the shop for a bit, so I didn’t have access to all of my files. I managed to have this one pre-written, so I polished it up a little bit and decided to post it here!
Enjoy!
After The Submission Scramble and Looking Forward
It has been a busy month! I recently moved and have been working a fair bit. Some of you may remember that I also undertook a project I was calling “The September Submission Scramble”. I’m proud to say that I finished and succeeded! Many magazine submissions, agent queries and contest entries later, I feel like I finished a lot over the course of the past month. I also feel like I was much more active.
The easiest way to win a card game is by holding most of the deck, right? Yes, technically, that’s not how you play cards, but you see my point? I feel like with submissions, you need to jump in if you want to play. I’ve always known that writing takes a surprising amount of luck, but the odds are better when you have a bigger sample size. The work I’ve been putting into this past month has been rewarding. It only takes ten minutes to get a query sent out, so I’ll probably be sending out a lot more of them. I highly recommend every writer try this. Pick a month and commit to submitting your poems, short fiction, novels, everything to anyone you think might publish it. The biggest problem is the fear of rejection, but I’m bracing myself for it.
That being said, I’m working on trying to figure out what the next month holds. Maybe some new short fiction to submit around or some more editing of older pieces. I’m half tempted to do Nanowrimo this year just to get the draft of something new out. Either way, I feel like I’m being a lot more active. Even if the choices I made this month were bad choices, at least I made them. I’m looking forward for what’s to come!
The Patron
A simple story about an opportunity in the form of a patron. Whenever I’m looking at D&D classes, I’m always curious what a modern-day warlock variation would look like. I might play more with this one cause I’m curious where it could go!
The Superb September Submission Scramble!
Be honest, you really opened this one for the alliteration, didn’t you?
Yes, friends, believe it or not, we have made it to September. The slow drudge of March 2020 has finally made it to September of 2021. I regret to say that my writing has had to take a back seat to a few things: a new job, finding a new apartment, and working on my mental and physical health. It’s been a busy time these past few months and my writing has suffered because of that. Not that I haven’t been writing or editing–I’ve been doing that almost daily since we were first told to stay home to help other people. But the work you never share never sees the light of day. Yes, I’m talking about submitting.
Whether your submitting a short story, flash fiction, or a novel, the process of submitting your work is daunting. It’s one thing to post my short little fiction pieces here so that people can get a taste of my writing, but presenting my work to an agent or editor with the sole purpose of them deciding if the piece’s worth? It’s terrifying! That being said, the easiest way to win at poker is to hold as many cards as you can. I know that’s against the rules, but that’s the thought behind the September Submission Scramble.
Every day this month, I will submit one thing to an agent, magazine or contest. I have a long backlog of things that have been rejected and edited, but I so rarely send them out for round two. Why? Fear, maybe. But that’s the point of the Scramble: submit with reckless abandon. If you get a rejection, I tell myself, you’re no worse off than if you don’t submit. If someone bites, you put your effort into it. So, I’m in the act of submitting as much as I can over the next month. Rejections, Acceptance, or Non-Responses: when there’s only three options? It doesn’t feel so bad. Try, Fail, Try Again, and Fail Better.
If you write, how are your submissions going? We’re entering magazine season again, so if anyone wants to join on, let me know! Part of the Scramble is to encourage each other to try.
The Editing Game
Earlier this month, I decided I wanted to take another crack at submitting my novel to agents and publishers, which means I’m back at editing again! With that in mind, I decided I wanted to share a few of my usual editing tricks for anyone who is working on Self-Editing their current projects!
- Read to an Audience:
This is probably my favorite recent editing trick I’ve had the chance to use. Reading out loud makes sure you read and hear every word in a sentence just a first time reader will interpret it. It can also be a good time to get some positive reinforcement. We aren’t all lucky enough to have a captivated audience on hand, so feel free to use whatever is available. Do you have a pet? They’ll love the attention. A plant? Plants do grow better when you talk to them. Rubber Duck? Well, at least it won’t tell you that you’re a hack! (Though it might say you’re a quack.) Currently, I’m using my owl egg-timer that doubles as my Writing-Spring timer (his name is Ap-owl-o…I’m not taking notes). - Highlight the Lines You Like, Not Just the Errors:
It’s good to have some positive notes when going through your manuscript. Whenever I’m in a workshop, I’ll point out the lines of dialogue or prose that I really like so the notes I give aren’t just critiques. The same has since been applied to my own editing to give Future-Nick something to look forward to. It also helps remind me that there is a reason I love the story so much. - Editing Somewhere Other Than Where You Write:
A change in scenery can often be great for writing, but it’s also really good for editing. I write at the same spot every day, but editing requires a different mindset in order to do it effectively. I will edit on the couch, so that I can have a different set of eyes while editing. It’s almost like going to a different office to work out a problem rather than looking at the same four walls. Granted, I have a view of my editing space from my writing space, but it’s different enough that I’ll be able to put myself in a better mindset. - Give Yourself A Deadline:
Like any sort of “Working From Home” experience, it can be easy to give yourself abstract deadlines and set things aside for too long. Procrastination, after all, is a form of perfectionism and that’s what writing is all about. Instead, I make sure a date to have my editing done by so that I can be ready when it comes. More often than not, giving myself a deadline encourages me to finish a project early rather than stretch it out until the last minute. It’s easier to finish things if you plan things in advance.
What are some of your favorite self-editing tricks and tips?
Cereal Box Prize
Do you remember the contests they used to have on the back of cereal boxes? Ever try to finish one?
The End of Captain Juliet
A few days ago, my friend Laurel told me about a dream that she had. The premise, she explained, had something to do with pirates in the time of Les Mis. One specific visual she had was of a woman tied to a burning ship. I couldn’t possibly turn up that kind of visual without giving this woman some kind of story. I set myself to telling this character’s story and was very excited about what came from it. I couldn’t not share it with all of you!
Marking the Way
I love a good map. I like looking at older maps or fantasy maps, working to understand the old roads, territories, and what was considered important to the cartographers of the day. How a place is illustrated and navigated can be as telling as any other artifact. When forests, roads, and cities can be so easily simplified, these places’ stories beg to be told. How did this town come to be? Why did they avoid this forest? What made this road necessary?
I know authors who will start their stories with a map. Sometimes it’s a map of a town or city, sometimes the entire world. Maps of real and fantastic places at the beginning of a book always make me a little bit giddy because that’s the first indicator that the writer has put time into their worldbuilding, which is a sign of a good story. Having a good map can really immerse your readers into a fantasy world as an artifact they can refer to.
I love starting with a map. I feel like just knowing the geography can help create the story. Are the characters sea-side folk, used to a cool breeze over sandy beaches? Are they from the far northern mountains, dressed in thick clothing to keep the chill and the cold away? Or are they from the far inland desert, forged in scorching sands and treating water as more precious than their gold? Here are a few of my thoughts on some of my favorite fantasy maps.
- Narnia – The Chronicles of Narnia, C.S. Lewis: From the humble Lamp Post to Cair Paravail, Narnia is rife with adventure. The major landmarks that will become familiar are easy to see and the locations are easy to find. Reading these a child, one can hop quickly from place to place, even recognizing the familiarity after thousands of years (or 20 if you pick up the books again after a very long time).
2. The Stillness – The Broken Earth Series, N.K. Jemisin: The first thing that really struck me about this map was the marking of plates. Knowing what little I did stepping in, it makes perfect sense that the maps of this world would care about the location of tectonic plates. It’s a simple thing, but it tells so much about the story. There are a few important cities marked, but most of the story takes place on the road, so knowing the major areas take precedence (and even then, more for understanding where people are from rather than where they are). As we learn where the characters are in relation to one another, the scale of the map really makes the journey that much more incredible.
3. Earthsea, The Wizard of Earthsea, Ursula K. LeGuin: Even in a land predominantly made of water, maps are crucial aspects of storytelling. When hopping from island to island, knowing the relative location can tell a reader so much about the area, the alliances, and distances between areas. Especially when you consider that clashing wind and water currents make for storms, all these islands can make for death traps when they constantly break against the islands.
4. Middle Earth, Lord of the Rings/The Hobbit, J.R.R. Tolkien: I wouldn’t be honest if I didn’t say that this probably inspired my love of maps. Like Narnia, it’s easy to track the journey of our heroic hobbits. Being able to see not only the kingdoms, but towns and cities within the kingdoms makes the battles easier to track. It’s east to feel the fear as the forces of Mordor press further into Gondor and threaten the Shire. And with so many adventures going on, it helps to see where all our heroes are throughout the series.
Maps are a powerful tool for enriching the story for readers. Maps add an element of reality that can bring the story to life and–quite literally–put you alongside the heroes in the tale. Knowing how close they are to danger can make the risk that much greater and seeing how close they are to their goals really makes the anticipation for success (and fear of failure) that much greater.
What’s your favorite fantasy map?
Creative Combat
Every so often, when the stars align and timezones aren’t an encumbrance, I like to do creative things with other creative people. Whether it’s a battle for word count, a goal setting challenge or just doing something creative with someone to keep you accountable, I have a few friends I know I can count on for Creative Combat! If you want to feel motivated, here’s how you can do your own!
Everyone has their own project and they don’t always line up. Everyone has a project they’re working on: writing, editing, drawing, knitting, whatever! Everyone sets a goal, either as a time goal or something more specific like word count or pages edited. One friend and I like to add stakes to our little combat sessions (nothing serious beyond having to make our loss public on Facebook or Twitter). Then, the work begins. It’s best to set a timeframe, if only to check in with each other at a certain point.
I’m not a normally competitive person. I’m usually a fan of collaboration which makes writing an interesting choice, due to its solitary nature. However, having motivation with another person–even without stakes–is such a huge factor in my productivity sometimes. It can be hard when you’re working alone, so having someone else to work with is important. Accountability can be so hard (it’s half the reason I started working on this blog), but having someone you promised to work with can make that work more valuable. Even if it just means you have someone to consistently work with and share your struggles with, it beats sitting alone at the computer trying to will the words onto the screen.